by A piece of my broken heart is embedded in you forever Jun 9, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The sadness decorates this face, |
by Nobodys Hero
What a beautiful poem, your wording is perfect and very descriptive. You seem to develope throughout this short poem which is a difficult thing to portray yet i believe you managed it quite well =] Excellent job the only thing i would suggest changing is the structure of the poem to make the flow easier. |