by Beautiful Forever Jun 10, 2009
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
Sophisticated - a brilliant smile, |
This was a very well-written piece, the flow and rhyming were right on target and in my mind, never were off. I really enjoyed all the imagery and descriptions you fully explained, this was a unique write! Your word choice made this poem alive to me and explained so much, great work! 5/5 from me, a brilliant write. Take care and keep it up! |