Wow, this was an impressive write. The repetition had a nice touch and the rhyming was wonderful. This was such a dark poem, but it held so much imagery too. 5/5 from me, keep on writing, always and forever...

~MaryAnne

Deep inside he's a liar
His mind consumed in scorching fire.
Deep inside his heart is abused
He can't accept that he's been used.

*I love this. The imagery is perfect for the feelings you are trying to express. One thing I would chage is "used" I would say "misused"*

Deep inside he hates them all
His anger beckons to watch them fall.
Deep inside he maintains the strife
But soon he'll begin to lose the fight.

*I like that you repeat "deep inside" It's very effective to the story you are trying to tell about this man*

Deep inside his heart fades
Wishing that it had seen better days.
Deep inside he's been put through this often
So now he'll lay dead in his coffin.

*I think you rushed the ending. I was hoping you would talk abot what made him this way. Anyways I like the way you wrote this. Keep it up Nic. You never fail to amaze me. Nik*