Excellent poem Nic, your wording entranced me from line one and you clearly got your message across. Great emotions and feelings expressed, this was a pleasure to read. 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless You!

~MaryAnne

Not my favorite...but still a good poem. You have all the right elements to make anything you write a brillant piece of work. This one didn't touch me like the others though. Keep it up hun. Nik

Very niceeee! 5/5

200/100
brilliant