Comments : Rainfall~Cinquain

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Rainfall is indeed all that you described here, MaryAnne... In my country rainy days are becoming scarce and I really, really love it when it does rain. I always take a walk right afterwards to breathe in the freshness of the air and the scents from nature:)

    Good job on both the format and the content:)

    *hugs*
    5/5 Ingrid

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    The only line I didnt like was the last one.. 'Goodness' I dont know what it was but not a really powerful word to me personally as I read it. Everything else though was perfect, described rain so well.. the refreshing smell that goes along with it and the peaceful feeling that comes with it. :] Ahhh.

    Temps!