Good work on this one. i enjoyed reading this from start to finish, a little insight into ones soul i think - which is always a good thing. the understanding may have been lost in places and some lines either made no sence or were forced - but what makes no sence to me or another could make perfect sence to you and your wife to be, a job well done.
some spelling mistakes, but overal a very nice read.

Good one

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