Comments : There`s A Friend...

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Amen to your words. We are all special to God and He is always there for us no matter what and no matter if no one else is. Well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Jayc

    According to James 4:8 "Draw close to God, and he will draw close to YOU" to do darw close to him the same verse continues " Cleanse YOUR hands, YOU sinners, and purify YOUR hearts, YOU indecisive ones." good poem!

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is indeed a great poem. Filled with inspiration. Very well done, 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Olwin,

    This poem about God is really nice, because you made it a friendship poem. Most people would have placed it in the "life"section, but now it has gained so much from just putting it here. Indeed He is such a good friend. Once you open your heart to Him, there is no end to the love that flows through you.

    Sometimes our path is lonely here,
    And all around us fails...
    Our hopes are dashed, theres no one near,
    Who wants to hear our tale

    ^^

    These lines touched me most, because they are so relatable. Life can be so lonely at times..indeed:)

    A much beautiful poem, so glad I stumbled across it:)

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Grant Gilbert AKA Slash

    That was a really lovely and obviously heartfelt poem Olwin. It was also well written and a joy to read. Thank you so much for sharing it with us
    5/5

    Grant

  • 15 years ago

    by abullettotheheart

    That was Just beautiful.
    Amen =]