A Plump Canvas Underplot (Puente)

by Italian Stallion   Jun 11, 2009


Intertwined like ivy climbing a wall,
reversed then reunited standing tall.
Scripted with the hands of creation,

~a plump canvas underplot~

twisted the standards of production.
Bloomed flowerings encompassing the screen
viewed as though an intricate dream.

© Copyright 2009 By: Italian Stallion

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The Puente, a poem created by James Rasmusson, and is somewhat similar to the Diamante. Like the Diamante, you start with one aspect of a topic or issue and then, line by line, work toward another aspect. In the center is a line that bridges the two aspects together.

The form has three stanzas with the first and third having an equal number of lines and the middle stanza having only one line which acts as a bridge (puente) between the first and third stanza. The first and third stanzas convey a related but different element or feeling, as though they were two adjacent territories. The number of lines in the first and third stanza is the writer's choice as is the choice of whether to write it in free verse or rhyme.

The center line is delineated by a tilde (~) and has "double duty". It functions as the ending for the last line of the first stanza AND as the beginning for the first line of the third stanza. It shares ownership with these two lines and consequently bridges the first and third stanzas.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I have not heard of this form before, many poets on here learn a lot from you, thank you for explaining the form and its rules at the bottom. That is very helpful.

    "Intertwined like ivy climbing a wall,"

    The simile here was beautiful, this line just seemed so alive and real. I could picture this in my mind and the thought of it.

    "reversed then reunited standing tall."

    Loved the imagery here, I never have thought of it this way like you have described.

    "Scripted with the hands of creation,"

    This line just wowed me, probably my favorite line. I keep re-reading it and it just holds much hope and power.

    "~a plump canvas underplot~"

    "plump canvas" was very surprising to me, I really haven't heard "plump" used much in a poem and it was used so differently here.

    "twisted the standards of production."

    I think you could write a two line poem and still leave the reader satisfyed, this line alone holds so much, I just don't know what to say but great job. I am sorry I have no suggestions for you.

    "Bloomed flowerings encompassing the screen"

    I haven't heard "flowerings" before, so this was interesting to read.

    "viewed as though an intricate dream."

    Now I like how this line could easily be cliche, but the way you worded it made it the opposite.

    5/5 from me, keep up the great work!

    Take care and God bless you!

    ~MaryAnne

  • 15 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I liked it