I have not heard of this form before, many poets on here learn a lot from you, thank you for explaining the form and its rules at the bottom. That is very helpful.
"Intertwined like ivy climbing a wall,"
The simile here was beautiful, this line just seemed so alive and real. I could picture this in my mind and the thought of it.
"reversed then reunited standing tall."
Loved the imagery here, I never have thought of it this way like you have described.
"Scripted with the hands of creation,"
This line just wowed me, probably my favorite line. I keep re-reading it and it just holds much hope and power.
"~a plump canvas underplot~"
"plump canvas" was very surprising to me, I really haven't heard "plump" used much in a poem and it was used so differently here.
"twisted the standards of production."
I think you could write a two line poem and still leave the reader satisfyed, this line alone holds so much, I just don't know what to say but great job. I am sorry I have no suggestions for you.
"Bloomed flowerings encompassing the screen"
I haven't heard "flowerings" before, so this was interesting to read.
"viewed as though an intricate dream."
Now I like how this line could easily be cliche, but the way you worded it made it the opposite.