Rainbow Kisses

by Poet on the Piano   Jun 11, 2009


Fervent rainbow kisses,
Bask in the sun's lucid rays,
Garnished with overbearing lust,
Reflecting each other's affection.

Colors falling in cascades,
Bursting with rich melodies,
Joining together harmoniously,
Everlasting love now unified.

Lulling the dawn of day,
Soft humming echoes,
Two hearts now one soul,
Dancing gaily in the heavens.

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This is a lot different from my previous poems, this is one of my first love poems in a very long time.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    Your words were beautiful and descripitive. The only problem with that is the fact that I believed because of all this poems "fluff" (and I mean that in the most commplimentary way) I wasn't able to grasp the real messag behind your poem.

    You have a superb vocabulary and I give you koodoos on that. Unfortuantly I am not and audience member for this poem.

    If I'm too blunt please tell me.

  • 15 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    Wow this poem was so beautify written.
    i love how descriptive you were and the flow was excellent. you certainly have a way with word.
    well done
    5/5

    -->Jess<--

  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    Wow this is good the wording is very desciptive you can really picture it clearly there is not rythem but the emotion was really intese the structure is really well laid out within the poem

    well done

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Oh my goodness.. I havent read a poem like this in so very long.. I thought your first two stanzas were absoultely beautiful.. the word choice was awesome and painted awesome imagery.. Wow this was stunning.. you should be proud, I really thought you went above and beyond with your title here..

    Great job!

    5/5.

    Temps (Beyond a Poets Mind)

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very well thought out love poem with a strong choice of words, MaryAnne. I loved certain expressions, such as :" Fervent rainbow kisses,
    Bask in the sun's lucid rays," and "Lulling the dawn of day,
    Soft humming echoes,"

    I think you made something really beautiful here, well done:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid