by Jad Jun 11, 2009
category :
Nature, environment /
nature
Crashing waves on sand, |
A very creative write, this was a pleasure to read. The descriptions were amazing and you perfectly worded this haiku, nice work! 5/5 from me, take care and God Bless You! |
by Lady Nik
I like this. I like how your words show how the wave moves instead describing the color. Very creative. Nice work Austin :) Nik |