Comments : Tired

  • 15 years ago

    by Kianna

    This poem is great....it kinda explains me....

  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    WOW. the last line is very powerful, i loved that.

    some lines seem forced, and some unoticably forced. the wording and style is great, but id clean it up a little with spell checker.

    a very passionate, powerful insight into a life.
    Well done

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