Wow, this was a masterpiece, I loved it. I wish I didn't use all my nominations, otherwise I'd nominate this. The flow, structure and deepth was fantastic. I liked your choice of wording, it was as if you 'painted' a painting with words. Excellent work, keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

I enjoyed this very much. While reading, I could literally see an artist stand before an easel painting a picture, choosing colors, dipping the brush. Well done.

I really enjoyed this piece. You used such lovely wording and I could really see what you were doing. I love the imagery. The imagery you used made this more than just a poem but a painting. Very beautiful work Jen. Keep it up :) Nik

There were too many fillers in this piece, especially the and's..almost at the end of each stanza there's a filler word.

"It's an abstract art piece with originality"
^The syllable count here went a little bit of, comparing to the rest of the stanza.

Your ending didn't say much.
a good write though.
Write on~ :)