Condemned Fate

My life is never what I dreamed of.
All the thoughts and images I shove.
Trying to find myself again,
But how can I when I'm sinking in sand.

*Hmmm...this isn't my favorite opening. I wouldn't have used "shove" in the second line. It doesn't make sense to me. I would reword the whole first stanza. Because "sand" and "again" don't rhyme. Try this.
My life is not what I dreamed it to be
All of these thoughts and images I can't believe
Trying to find myself again
But how can I, when I'm falling to my end.
I don't know, that sounds better to me, but eh. Do what works for you*

I've been told once or twice.
It might have been trice.
That I should think on the bright side,
But how can I when it hides.

*I like this stanza. I hardly ever see people use the word "trice", but I'm glad you did. Clever :) *

Fallen beyond recognition,
There's no time for repetition.
For I'm lost and theres no coming back,
And that is a truly, sad fact.

*The first line was a little confusing. When I think about someone falling, I don't think about them being different, just sad. Maybe "Gone past recognition" or "Changed beyond recognition" would work better there. Other than that the rest was good*

Still they think I can change,
But I'm no longer in range,
Of coming back to this world.
For I'm dead in a curl.

*Good, but the last line doesn't make sense. I wouldn't have used "curl". It just doesn't fit right there.*

This dream of a perfect me,
Is gone and I can no longer see.
See the truths or the lies,
Like looking out shut blinds.

*I love the last line, very creative.*

But now I pray this,
And this is my last wish.
That it will never be too late,
For someone to change their fate.

*Good ending hun. I hope I wasn't too harsh. just wanted to offer some advice. This wasn't your best, but who am I to decide lol. Hope I was able to help. Nik*