This was truly a good poem and the imagery in this poem was really good. You gave me the image in my head of a boy getting flowers for a girl but in the end she doesn't even want to smell them. The flow was good as well. The last thing is the emotion you put in the poem. You can tell that honestly you care more about her than anyone else even though there have been others. Overall you did a good job with your first poem on here. 5/5

This is a great first poem.

keep up the brilliant work

5/5

Thnx 4 tha comments i hav plenty more i need 2 get on here....

Wow thats great 5/5

That is really good
i love it!!!! :]
5/5