This poem is nicely set out, last stanza knocked me as one extra line, maybe cut out the bits you dont really need and leave the last line raw, making the reader want to find your next poem for a follow up. wording is good, but id add a few more stanzas - if possible, it seems this poem is good, but it could be so much more if you have another look at it.

Good job,

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I really liked this. I thought is was well written and had a simple but important messgae to it. I can really relate to this girls story. Keep it up. Nik