*Claps for you* This was such a beautiful piece of writing. If I didn't know you I could tell how deeply you love this girl just frrom your words here. The imagery is perfectly placed within your loose syntax. I really loved this poem. Keep on writing like this.You do it well. Nik

I liked it. The word usage was ok and the flow was good

"The comets,they are so always wandering,"
maybe
"The comets, they are always wandering,"
The "so" is not needed it doesn't sound right.

5/5

You painted a beautiful celestial portrait of love. It is a lovely picture indeed, taking love to a whole new plain of desires and meaning. I enjoyed this fantasy of pure adornment.

Connie

Breathtaking, powers of awesome and magic! I was perpleexed and taken back, Astrology is a creative way to portray deep love. Two thumbs up and a high five!