Comments : Reflections of the Moon Over a Lake

  • 15 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    As sea blown clouds drift opalescently across these waters,
    In your eyes,
    The death of all who've passed into the shades of Summer nights,
    A cloud, a last goodbye before the winds of time
    Their eyes knowing the silent secret of your smile
    They join in on the chorus of a million nights
    And beckon me to join them in nocturnal eyes of eternal silence.

    I like the way you described the moon as a
    silent death & the description of the moon's
    eyes. Its like looking at a maiden..great!

  • 15 years ago

    by NightFlyer

    Thanks for your kind words, Meena! I wrote this one a couple of days before I moved from Florida in May. My friend lived next a beautiful lake. A full moon rising over the lake in the early morning hours inspired this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Lynn Anderson

    Simply beautiful! Gave me chills of goodness. :)