Problems

by Holly Renee   Jun 13, 2004


Opens her eyes
look at her face
shes got makeup
all over the place
a tear on her cheek
falls to the floor
she turns away
walks to the door
she screams and yells
she continues to cry
shes alive on the outside
but the inside is gonna die
she cant take this any more
she takes a razor puts to her wrist
she watches a fountain appear
then all of a sudden
her problems disappear

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  • 20 years ago

    by Casondra

    Heyy I really liked this poem. You descibed everything really well but you kept it short. So yeah I liked it good job.

    *Casondra

  • 20 years ago

    by ~* Joyful *~

    I loved your poem you did really well at writting it! even though it was so short! well done and if you get time have a look at some of my poems and let me know what you think...