Psychotic Smile

by BREEawNUHH   Jun 15, 2009


*LOL. I have NO idea where this came from; I am not a stalker. haha. I think I'm breaking my writers block, though! :D yay!

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Twisted thoughts creep into my mind
painting this psychotic smile on my face.
If you had any idea what I was thinking
you'd stutter your words, your heart would race.

Don't come too close, I don't like attention
but I'm watching you as if I were a hawk.
You giggle and smile with your pretty girlfriends
not a thought in your mind that you're being stalked.

I don't make it subtle; you're too stupid to notice
that there's some strange fellow eyeing you.
Cherish your breath because the next could be the last
once I have a hold there won't be a thing you can do.

Briana Coulter
06.15.09

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  • 14 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Wow okay definatly sounds like a psychotic in your words.. lol kidding. Unexpected to read something like this from you, but definatly thourougly enjoyed each and every word, nicely done. :]

  • 15 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Dark and chilling
    What a creative mind. You brought dark visions to life with a few words. Well done (*V*)

  • 15 years ago

    by Damaris

    "If you had any idea what I was thinking
    you'd stutter your words, your heart would race."

    Wonderful line there. This line fits me well. My thoughts might scare people too and they have, but its ok.

    Nice poem, Dude! 5/5 for you!

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