"If you had any idea what I was thinking
you'd stutter your words, your heart would race."

Wonderful line there. This line fits me well. My thoughts might scare people too and they have, but its ok.

Nice poem, Dude! 5/5 for you!

Dark and chilling
What a creative mind. You brought dark visions to life with a few words. Well done (*V*)

Wow okay definatly sounds like a psychotic in your words.. lol kidding. Unexpected to read something like this from you, but definatly thourougly enjoyed each and every word, nicely done. :]