by victoria
I really like this poem its really good but the flow was messed up a little in the line "emotions of broken girl" try putting "emotions of a broken girl" not a big change but it helps the flow but like i said great poem 5/5 from me |
by silvertung69
I like this poem and the style. grate writing keep it up. |
by Dian PH
Why can't you see |
You can feel the emotion in every word. i really enjoyed reading your poem. |
You can feel the emotion in every word. i really enjoyed reading your poem. |
by Lauren
This is a really good poem! I can relate to this on so many levels. It's full of so much emotion and power. I think its very good!! |
by Em
Why can't you see |
by Dave
Great Work, A lot of emotions that I'm going through. I really enjoyed it. |