Listen to me

"I am the morning dew
When sun rises I change into something new
I travel all over the world with the relishing breeze
I fall down on people so that I can help their pain to ease"

Wow, this is a stunning opening. The wording you used pulled me into this poem and was so descriptive. Very well-penned, I am loving the images given off.

"I am all alone when I am stuck in the storm
Just waiting to drop so that I can pour happiness on someone who is in mourn
Listen to me I am whispering in your ears
Revealing my secrets that I have been holding for many years"

My only suggestion here and in the whole poem would be to add punctuation, but you don't have to.

Fourth line: A comma should be placed after "me" for a pause. Otherwise, a brilliant stanza, you have a way with words for sure.

"I am not a magician this is for what I am made
I am the very first thing that god ever create
Listen to me I am the rain
I put off hearts fire"

First line: Maybe reword to this:

"I am not a magician, I was made this way"

Second line: "create" should be "created".

Third line: Add a comma after "me".

"Listen to me I am the rain
I can be anything with ones desire
Listen to me I am the rain
Down on earth I see so much pain"

First line: Comma after "me".

Second line: "ones" should be "one's".

Third line: Comma after "me".

Fourth line: A powerful line, nice work.

"Only reason I want to fall
So that I can pour real life in you all "

Reword those two lines to this, it will read much better:

"The only reason I want to fall down
Is so I can pour real life in you all"

Otherwise, wonderful work. There are some things you could touch up on, but this whole concept was amazing. 4/5 from me, keep writing, you have much talent.

Take care and God Bless!

~MaryAnne