Its all in my head,
This disease is debilitating.

*That was my favorite line. The diction there is perfect*

It must be in my head;
I cant stop thinking about it,
Its driving me insane,
Am I supposed to feel this way?

* I love how you start this. It makes me wonder just how crazy you are and I also want to know what's in your head. Very creative start.*

Just drop dead in my tracks;
Yeah thats what I want to do,
If not now, how about tomorrow?

*This part seems a little random. It seems like your talking to yourself. If that's the case I like it. It gives the poem a more creepy feel to it*

To sleep, is my only wish
Just one nights rest.
It must be in my head;
I cant be seeing this,
Ive made it this way,
Why did it happen like this?

*I'm really liking how you toss those questions in there. I think it adds a nice touch to it. You express yourself so well. I love it ^.^*

And im jealous.
The man lies in my backyard
Sleeping so peacefully
Six feet under and total silence
And im thinking
Thats where I want to be.

*Aww what a sad ending. I like how you talk about the dead man and how you wish you were him. This was a very deep piece here. Keep it up hun. Nik*

Love It!!!!!!! i especially like the ending :p
5/5
~Kianna

Hmmmm powerful ending, ffits with the title, i mean the tone of the poem and the words choice all lead to one concept, a sad one ya but the poem is well expressed

5/5/
note :Thats where I want to be.

well thats not the solution :)

This is a very intense poem. I really like it because it is so in depth and very interesting. The wording was great and the stanzas flowed together very well. Great work!! 5/5!

So nice the flowe is great i rally like the wondering
nice work