by Nandiix3 Jun 15, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I'm tired of trying and lying. |
by mandy
That was really well written. I liked how you used the same sentence at the end as in the beggining; as if your trying to think this situation through, but you always end up back where you started. I can really relate to this poem. The emotions were amazing. The flow and the rhyme were good too. 6/5! (if there was one) |