Raspberry Kiss

by sibyllene   Jun 15, 2009


So much newness in the soft crushing
of a ripe red seeded
raspberry, lightly pressed
with the tongue to the ticklish roof, red
freshness seeps out and we mingle a
kiss, a red raspberry wetness, sweeter
than the tender soft destruction of
one red berry after another.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Also one of my favorites by you! another poem, that I always feel like visiting it again..boo

  • 14 years ago

    by Sunshine

    Oh man..i love it i love it i love it..esp that title RAAHHH...i hope this is nominate-able
    still..cause didnt pay attention b4 I comment..
    such a very new idea..

    well done..very poetic for me...gave me freshness..fruity lovely..poem..am adding it to my favs..

    WELL done!!Indeed
    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    It's a nature poem too...........
    let's hear it for the delicate substantiality of raspberries!....woohoo....
    season just about over for raspberries...
    fortunately not
    for kisses....;-)

    hoping you're well....
    just passin' through..
    grammagramma

  • 14 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    Such sweet words. Deeper than any ocean. Truly Amazing!

  • 15 years ago

    by Konstantin

    It's just a great tasting song.

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