What a wonderful tongue twister you have created here. Ironic that the tongue twister is about a stutterer. I too use to stutter really bad and on occasion I sometimes still do. I was awful at it and took classes and now I answer thousands of phone calls a week. So I suppose I do okay for someone that use to stutter so badly. There is a great message in your write too for kids and adults who stutter to know it can be beaten. Thanks for the write. Enjoyed it thoroughly.
Take Care,
kay

Poetic license flow like butter I must admit I have never seen butter flow?
As smooth as butter yes!
like the idea but to me unless it is a deliberate poetic license the poem does not work.
L2 - Yet he wanted his words to flow like water in a gutter or a ball hit with a putter or as smooth as butter

L7 - When his words flowed as smooth as butter
What do you think? Let us know if this is a help?

This is an amusing little poem
brought a little grin to my face :)
i am happy stevie was able to
overcome his stutter :)

good job

Keenan