I really like the use of imagery in this piece, it is a description of its own and it says a lot about the things you realize. The emotion is so strong and it is expressed in such a personal way to you, or so it seems, and an unusual way to the rest of us. I love the originality of this piece as well as the fact that you could say so much in only three stanzas. Wow.

Superb job.

5/5

~MRK