Lost Sweet Dream {a final goodbye}

by Cate Rock   Jun 16, 2009


Let me be your river,
My I never die.
May I be your shelter?
Just let me stand by your side.

Take my life as your own,
Kiss me when you want to.
May this promise be carved in stone:
Ice would melt, diamonds to rare,
Carve it in my skin,
I don't really care.

I'd give my life just to see that smile,
I'd walk across Egypt...
and love every mile.

Little do you know, not a moment moment goes by,
That thoughts reply in my head of each time you've every cried.

I'd travel the world and every sea,
Just for the chance of you standing next to me.
More than a passion...
Different from an obsession,
It's love...true real love.

Love that travels over the Atlantic and through skylights.
Love that is so true to right...it travels through white light...

It is the purest love i know...
The only real love I've learned to show.
And I show it to you...
give it freely to you...
And what do i get?
What do u do?

Push me away...show me your pain.
For all my work; a cold stair, and a cold shoulder is what I gain...

Never again will i fall for those eyes...
Cold dark words upon beautiful dark sky's.
His love is what I wanted
a broken heart is what i got.
This hole in my chest as if i got shot.

Next time will be different,
I shall love again.
for one who couldn't love at all...
i surly fell in love with him.

Goodbye Mr. Alibi.
Goodnight Mr. Writer, Mr. Cooler than ice.
I do believe I'll now call it a night.

~Kevin

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  • 15 years ago

    by Love Panda

    >>excellent work, im starting to really enjoy reading your work now, from start to finish its beautifully styled and set out. the words you use astound me and some of your sentances have me wanting more, want me wanting you o write more, again a few pelling mistakes, which can be fixed in edit mode. when i read this poem it made me feel i was reading several things all at once wrapped into one - which to me is wierdly good. so good job there.<<

    Excellent work.

    IBE
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  • 15 years ago

    by Obscura

    This is a good poem i liked the emotion in it i could feel it pull me in as i read it it was so deep i could get lost in it the stucture is very well laid out within the poem i liked the metaphors in it

    i just think you should change my to may in one of the lines in the first paragraph it will make more sense