This was such a sad piece. I felt so many strong emotions when I read this. I love how you wrote this, it was like a story. And I thank you so much for sharing it with us. The imagery was great and made everything easy to understand. Very nice work. I also like the periodic syntax. Keep it up. Nik

First of thank you for commenting on my poem 'why' it's very appreciated.
Secondly, this poem is very touching especially to me as I have just lost a co-worker and a close friend to cancer just last week so I know exactly what you're going through.
Very emotional and powerful piece, 5/5. Em

A very warm dedication for your friend. Thank you for the story. I'm glad you found a release, of a kind, here. It's what poery is for. I hope you continue to write on. I would be glad to read more from you. Good luck.

An awsome tribute to a woman who touched many hearts it appears.

May we all strive to do the same and touch others hearts as well.

A beautiful dedication. For sure, where ever she is right now, she'll love this, and would truly appreciate it. Good job!
God bless you always!

-Pink Butterfly-

Beautiful write 10/5

This Was Sad And Beautifully Written 5/5

I was just reading the life quotes and I
read yours the one about how people
will forget what you said and they will forget
when you said but they will always remember the way you made them feel
WOWWWW thats a one great quote that really hits you right in the heart, very relatable to everybody. I just wanted you to know that that was the best quote i ever read
i wrote it down and i will say it one day to somebody. anyway this poem was pretty cool
I like cause you felt this kind of love for stranger just a nice lady you see while shopping that says alot about you 5/5
send me a message when you put something else up I like how you think
so get to the typing lol

Very sad,I know the feelings .I too lost my mother to cancer she was only 42.

A wonderful way to let people know what they missed knowning this person and a touching way of letting everyone know how compassionate is your heart.
Well done , beautifully written with love

I love this poem, it's really sweet and from the heart. There's a lady I met at my work (she's left to go to another job) but I consider her a good friend. All in the office call her Mother. As soon as I read this I thought if anything would happen to her it would be devastating. Beautiful words

x

Beautiful it touched my little dark heart it's a great tribute hun 5/5

-Bet