by Cate Rock Jun 16, 2009
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Life, society /
other
The slow song causes the most pain, |
by Love Panda
>>to me this isnt a poem, its the pre intro bit. add a few more stanzas and go into detail and you would have a good thing there. the words you have chosen to use - i love, i wouldnt change them, not one. great start<< |