Joeeeee. :]
This was really simple i thought but really good. I really liked the few simple rhymes, they didnt feel forced and i think they added to your piece.
but now a secret love is being released
via my poetic verses for all to see,
ponder, and prod.
^^ Do tell! You know all about my curiosity.. :]
So other than that im not really sure what to say, it was really cute i felt. :]
5/5