This is a really good poem. Your words flowed beautifully. I really enjoyed reading this poem.

Keep up the great work

5/5

Hay i like this poem it had a rhytmn and rhyme keep up the good work!

Wow i love this 5/5

WOWW!!
this is one of the best poems i've read:)
i can atually feel wat ur feeling n i think
it flows rlly good...
i rlly love this part:

I look at you, and then look at me,
"How can you like me?" I Don't see,
When you go, I'm left to think and worry,
"How long..? " Before you leave me in a hurry.

it rhymes but it also shows the emotion n fear
you're feeling from jux thinking bout her
leaving you....
well i love this poem:]
keep on writting!! :D

A brilliant poem about love. I really liked this one :] Well written and expressed..
Keep writing!