by Fire Catches Jun 17, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Part One |
by Love Panda
>>the 2nd half or your poem is stronger than the 1st and i havnt decided yet if that is a good thing or not. a good poem, last stanza got a little lost from the flow of the ones before it, but your use of words has had a huge impact on me, 'She whispers "No more I try"' & 'troubled teen', i think your poem is great.<< |