Liked it a lot... It reflects a great passion for love and like how it bridges the starting and the ending.
Great work. Mind if i give you a 4/5 ??

Anyways, it doesnt matter...its still very well imagined and perfectly presented.
Cheers!!!

~TwiTcH

I like this poem alot
it is very peaceful and serene
the flow kinda just brings the reader along
i find the words just kind of just flowed like a river into my brain
you know what i mean right??
well great job

also i like the reference to you being the moon and he the sun...
very classic and very romantic :D

Keenan