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by Lisa Jun 17, 2009 category : Love, romance / first love
I awake early each morning a smile upon my face. My heart feels warm and tender together, by God's grace. I still feel like I'm dreaming I can't believe we're here. Laying close beside you there's nothing I need fear. Your hand it feels so tender your eyes they kiss my soul. You are the very heart of me For once I am one whole. This one is short but sweet, a love that is blessed by God effects us all in more ways than we could possibly ever know.
by Lisa
Thanks for the feedback T I appreciate it.
by Timothy r
I well written piece as always Lisa, a poem you should be proud of for sure, welcome back! also, the last sentence in stanza 1, it should be together, not togeather, just to make it look better. Tim