by Hopeless Romantic Jun 17, 2009
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Before it began, |
Your poem was good and reasonably well structured, the flow was slightly broken by an uneven syllable count you might want to watch that in the future, it makes a big difference to how well your poem flows when read. Other than that it was an enjoyable read on what is obviously a subject close to your heart. |
by The Queen
Very well structured, flows perfectly all through out the poem. I hope she had the chance to read it, if not then you better coz you never know what awaits for you.. |
I really really like this poem |