A good piece of iambic penameter and simple rhyming in this work. Brilliant! You should be proud.
5/5
~Chins~

This is a great poem
not sure why it is in the love section i found it actually kinda sad
seeing such love torn apart

also there is one suggestion i would uhh i guess
like to suggest hah
i would change the line...
"Though you were my first love"
to although you were my first love
i find it just flows abit nicer
it is just my opinion though

Keenan