by ASPHYXIATED
Gone straight to my favourites and nominated. |
Brittnizzle, my lovely and wonderful friendmate, did I not tell you you were freaking talented?! (: |
Wow Britt, what a write, I loved it. However, there was no punctuation in this piece, I think by adding it, it will give this piece so much more depth in my opinion. I really liked the rhythm of this piece, it flowed really nicely. I'd also have to say, you don't need to capitalize every begining word of each line. The only time you really need to us capitalization is when you are starting a sentence or emphisising a word. Overall this was a fantastic write Britt, I really don't have much to critique here. Great job, keep up the fantastic work. :] |
by Good Enough
I love this poem. Its really good. Keep up the good work. |
by Rachel RTVW
Book splits open with a tremor of the spine |