I really enjoyed reading this poem
although i'm not a big fan of love poems
i liked this one

Silent little rain drops fell on my forehead,
but you kissed them away with your lips.

i thought that part was very cute.
well done.

Hmm..Indeed another cute piece from you. I love the transparency in this poem that way it made me easier to imagine the scene that you tried to portray. Good job.

This is a boring poem with zero emotion. It's basically a cliche ontop of cliche ontop of cliche. Unoriginal in every way.

Peace and prosperity,

(RKD)

Again good words but now the picture is lacks continuity. The reader is jerked from scene to scene with no connections. Left me with no idea of where you were going.