"Sorrow-filled hearts
As we get past this part.
Let's take a minute to go back
And look at who you were in fact.
You were a great friend
And we'll think of you without end."

This part is in a way deep. I especially like "You were a great friend, And we'll think of you without end" I see that it rhymes, and it's the good kid of rhyme, it fits.

"Even though you are gone
We'll still remember you like a song.
You still live on in our hearts like a ringing bell"

That was my favorite part in the whole poem, I like that you refered remembering him like a song, because people usually don't forget songs. =] Also, the part about living in your hearts like a ringing bell, that was just touching. It is nice that you care for this boy that much.

It was really good, I wish it was longer..
4/5 Keep on writing.