by a broken smile with a broken heart is a poets life Jun 19, 2009
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Today I saw the sun set, |
Not as strong as the others I have reviewed, this poem felt emptier, like there wasn't anything more or anything beneath the surface, I didn't feel the emotion you were trying to express in these words and it felt rushed, over too soon with not enough content. Sorry. but it was alright. |