This poem a lot of people can relate to, but aren't sure what to think of it.

I'm going to give you a bit of a break down. This poem is really well done and I loved the ending, I felt that the ending is what really made it stand out in my mind, that honestly sounds like a philosophical quote.

There are a few things i would suggest that you do. Stop putting the .... at the end of any sentence, if you want a break that is what the english language created periods and colon's for. The poem needs to be less direct and more of a metaphor, it's how the style of writing came about, a lot of people like it and feel it's the true way a poet is seperated from writers.

I feel that this poem is truly one that you can feel the scar with the person. Each line was like it's own little cut that severed the soul, it's really a good poem and felt it was a well versed poem and the ending was astonishing.

Very well done.