The sadness can be felt in these words you have expressed in this write. Try to remember to let your inner strength and soul guide you. May peace and joy fill your heart each and every day.

sadaddy

This poem is nothing short of amazing, I love its message, I made some changes to help with the flow, I'm sorry if I made to many.

The hunger in my heart,
Never seems to cease.
The hatred in my soul,
Venom has released.
Ever since you left,
This, is what I've become,
Lonely, tired, and weak,
Worst of all, so numb.
My inspiration to fly
Without my out swept wings,
Lies broken on this floor.
Now I'm a puppet on the strings.
Forced to the left,
Forced to the right,
Plopped here and there.
I'm losing to this fight.
Until I finally pulled away
finding love and encouragement,
I tore away the resentful lines,
and am living with enjoyment.
Ever since you left,
I have become so new.
The importance of my life,
Inside of me has grew.
Blossomed in my veins
And sprouted out with smiles.
I AM here for a reason.
To make my life worthwhile.
So thank you, for showing me,
This bran new way to live.
I will forever miss you,
but now... I'm here in life to give.

Now I run free, living in enjoyment.
Ever since you left,

*That was my favorite part. I thinky you did an amazing job with this. I can really relate to what you are saying. I lovethe flow and te words you use are so vivid. Keep it up hun. Nik*