Took the words right out of my mouth. This is great writing! Things will get better, even though it may not seem like it. Hope things are good!

Wow. I like it alot. So simple but so well written. It flows perfectly and your rhyme scheme is great! I loved ur choice of wording. Its a powerful piece and i really enjoyed the read. Well done. 5/5

This is sad poem... Like how it was written, you can tell by your words, how much your hurting...
Well done!!