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by sexyCheckers Jun 20, 2009 category : Love, romance / lost love
So I guess you want me to apologize To take back everything that I said. To say I lied right through my teeth That every word I never actually meant. Well, I hate to break your optimisn But thats so far from the truth Just because I said I needed someone, Doesnt mean I ever needed you. I hate what you did to me And the way you made me feel Its as though you've taken the fantasy Out of this world I wish was never real. So I told you how I felt, And you took it the wrong way, But just because you didnt understand, Doesnt mean Ill take back the things I said that day.
by Aveena
Goood job overall, but one criticism: I believe in your second stanza first line, you meant optimism not "optimisn"