>>a very disturbing poem for me to read, but you captured my heart with it. some days peopl think about doing just what you described and some arnt sure of if what is life is true or that they are confusing it with insanity - so good on you for making the poem feel that way.<<

a different direction than others which i love - something fresh and new is always exciting to read. some grammer needs to be fixed and a little rhymeing wouldnt go a miss but other than that, well done.

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