Still in the Smoker's Section

I liked this. Small, speedy stanzas, but with good reason. I liked how it seemed like you were the person with the answers, and then revealled yourself to be in a similar position. That interested me.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read.

P.P.S. Thank you for your comments on my poem 'Death to the Both'.

You had a good point here, the twist at the end just showed that words really can and do affect ones mentality and the way that they live their lives. Good job :)