That's a really well written poem.
i've been looking for a poem like that, but they can't compare with yours.

No, not your usual style, but brilliant none the less. I loved the way you used such a wide vocabulary this time, it definately helped your writing. Well done :)

My Dear;
Who did you fall for?

Aint heartbreak a biitch ....

This is absolutely beauiul, I like how you described this. My fave stanzas were
"I knew this would happen,
I just didn't know when.
My feeble heart
Has fallen in love with you again.

Untainted and untarnished
Unequaled and sublime.
Your ardor keeps me fervent,
And I won't lose it this time." < flawless. 5/5, Em

This is really breath-takingly beautiful, I love it! All of it (: 5/5