Take my Hand

by Gasttlee   Jun 21, 2009


Don't know why or how, but I just thought of this song and wrote it. Hope those who look like it.

You said you needed love.
Well, guess what?
I need it, too.

I just can't help
what I feel inside for you.

So what do I have to do
to face you?

(Chorus)
Take my hand
and I'll show you love
like never before.

Just take my hand
and have faith in love
in love.

Have faith in love
in love.

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My heart swears it has no need,
but I know it to be wrong.

When I have love,
I know I will be strong.

Cause there's no denying
love moves you along
a path of righteousness.

Endure the hard knocks to come,
for there is light all around.

(Chorus) 2x

I hope for the best
no matter who I'm with.

My love is eternal
for all that's in my life.

When we're separated,
I can't lie,
I cry and die to sleep.

(Chorus) 2x

What I tell you
is real in my heart.

And I know
you know this to be true.

Words can't put it into feeling.
I have to rely on you
to love me the way I do you.

Your love must come from heart
to live forever in life.

(Chorus) 3x

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  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
    Great Job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
    Great Job. 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by KJ

    Ahhh. Another perfect write. And the fact that it was a song makes it even more sweet. I loved it. But the suggestion Miren made wasnt a bad one.
    Great Job. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Hallo A Lilium

    I can definitely relate to this piece. It's a nonstop
    challenge to find that one true love. We search in every direction not knowing exactly where to look or what to look for. I can vehemently proclaim that it is not easy. It's a battle. You'll wage war's against other's. It will be a long journey. For however many loves you have lost there will be little found. Search with your heart. Open your eyes to people you see as too boring. It's never simplistic. Love is a hard road to travel. Just stay on the right path. Have faith in love. Love will find you in the outcome. I loved this song. It was very canny and cunning. The different format and structured climax. It held a beautiful meaning. Love is what both partners should have. Very nice.

    5/5

    -Lilium

  • 15 years ago

    by The Queen

    My heart swears it has no need,
    but I know it to be wrong.
    ^^I think these lines would look better if you'll rephrase them like:
    My heart swears it has no end
    And i know it, im never wrong..

    But you did impress me with the message behind this song.Keep writing..

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